shadows

Its lacking sincerity.

>>462323
thorns in the right side background

too toned down black inside stroke on the word trap looks bad make everything look bigger and stupider and blingier study pen and pixel covers harder they would never use text that small for a title :3

Taste

>>462323
bottom left is aislop

>>462515
Better than human slop.

>>462323
Make yeshua's skin darker, and give him a wider, flatter nose. More afrocentric features in general I think. You're close though!

Flame decals on the car, thicker outlines on the text. Some lens flares.

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>>462323
You need to have a more consistent visual identity. The problem is a lack of vision I guess.

Notes:
-The various outlines around the "trap" look iffy and how completely different it looks from the Jesus element is jarring.
-The bottom text is not really aligned in any good manner. It's interestingly placed but it has no real impact. If it completed the circular shape created by the the positioning of the "Trap Jesus" it'd be cooler looking
-the ancient egypt background is useless here and doesn't add anything to the ideas introduced by any of the text. If aqualantis is a cool place that is water themed then why is there a fucking pyramid here?
-the space ship idea is out of left field and is better left out or implied in some other symbolic/esoteric way
-the car looks like shit
-the Poseidon? on the left there looks incredibly bad.

I had a better idea for this. I'm no expert mind you, I'm just a guy with too much free time.

it needs additional "bling" to balance the bling of the car.

maybe put a audacious jewled cross around jesus neck or an adidas symbol on his robe or maybe a sexy girl in a bikini