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>>825678
>shading with black
It looks like shit. she lives in some kind of dingy depressing post soviet brutalist apartment?
Besides that, which is an obvious easy fix, you could study some drapery, and maybe if u want her to be goon worthy, you could. idk. make her show some skin besides underwear and the thinnest, eating disordered thighs I've ever seen.
Give her some cuts, too (personal prefference)
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>>825688
For an average anime girl, they're fine. But if the goal is for it to be gooneable, and the piece focuses on the thighs, unless it's an anorexia fetish piece the thighs should be much bigger. and if it actually was an anorexia fetish piece, they should be much thinner. it's just sexless as it currently is
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This is an older artwork of mine, was testing waters with this one! mostly because most of my other artwork is of myself irl or can be traced back to me which i rather stay anonymous to a degree. anyhow, i've greatly improved since, and don't worry, your requests have been heard~
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>>825794
i think your art is really cute!! i definitely think its just more suggestive than goonable, but she's such a cutie patootie that i can imagine hanging out with and giving her lots of hugs... some of the criticism you've received like about the hands is valid though, but its still adorbs! i'd love to see more of your work :3