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Welcome to /salt/, drawing is suffering edition.
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How do i make this more ero?
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This is just a work in progress, so I wanted to inquire on any major fixes I should make on this.
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Oh shit, new captcha?
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I wanna make an erotic comic. Never done NSFW before so I can't really draw sexual poses from my memory. I know it's ironic but I really don't wanna search up straight-up porn as a reference. Where can I get good anatomical poses for a lewd comic and what do NSFW comic artists usually use?
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>>7844287
you sound like you don't have any particular taste in porn, so why do you want to draw them? I mean, you don't have to if you are not interested in them.
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you'll have to redraw in a new pose like other anons said
>>7842552
the dead line weight is really killing this for me
>>7842562
needs line weight variation as well
>>7842996
make sure to reference hands and drapery for this since i suspect that could be a weak point but i can see this coming out pretty cute actually
>>7843038
proportions are way off, they're like 10 heads tall, your forms are flat and simplistic. just keep it up
>>7843471
hopefully this is intended as the rough sketch, distended belly in the final panel is an unappealing shape. breasts at the wrong angle as well
>>7844375
very nice, only nitpicks are that the eyes are flat and uneven, shadows around butthole are giving it a oddly protruding form, feet look like they're missing the pinky toes, and theshadow line on the breast on the left that extends up the center line of the chest is harsh and could be removed
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>>7844375
Love how realistic the body looks
Here's what I'm working on. Gonna be a fully rendered illustration so its gonna be fun
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>>7844375
For a while I've been wanting to make a spicy comic story and I wanna try new things with it like NSFW drawings for an example. But I don't know how they're able to draw all those different sexual positions and angles in those kinds of comics.
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>>7847612
>But I don't know how they're able to draw all those different sexual positions and angles in those kinds of comics.
It's basically the same skill you need to do good action scenes. It's fucking hard. Most hentai/porn artists skimp on that stuff or cheat in any way they can to dodge the need of actually drawing multiple characters in a complex intertwined position.
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I don't think I ever git gud.
Only drawing porn/ecchi to get validation, its over for me isn't it?
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>hopefully this is intended as the rough sketch
Kinda. Just kinda doodled something to get back into it after not drawing since christmas, so I didn't really care about making it perfect. You're definitely right on the breast part, I kinda disagree on the shape, cause I really like it, but I may just have shit taste. Thanks for the feedback anon
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>>7842070
Moving away from twinks and onto big booba mommies
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face study, haven't painted in a while (oops)
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What's the secret to drawing faster?
I'm never gonna make it if I take forever between each drawing...
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Started as a little doodle I was playing around with, but it snowballed into something much larger.
I know the lighting on the musket is wrong when compared to the rest of her, but if anyone has any advice or critique on how to fix that or anything else, please share!
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>validation
from whom exactly? And what is stopping you from exploring? You gotta try to motivate yourself, anon; don't always look for validation for others. Make something for yourself first, others liking it is a bonus.
But it does concern what your own end goal is; hopefully progression.
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>>7846836
I think that's fair enough, but I probably won't add any more hours on that piece, but I'll keep it in mind.
>>7847156
thanks, coming from you is high praise. I had been trying to get the folds in the torso bends because it really gives the volume presence.
on the piece, I know you constructed it, but I felt the legs could use some adjustment, for aesthetic reasons, maybe making the thigh from viewer's left longer.
>>7847612
You don't have to draw a lot of sex positions, unless its actually porn focused pieces, but nsfw comic can be just story and a bit of nudity and vanilla hugging here and there.
>>7848434
Man, ear fucking is crazy.
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The face is busted, use a 3d model or smth. The rest has mistakes too but they dont matter as much, it has a nice charm to it, but the face even feels like it doesnt fit the rest of the style. Its also busted, face and whole head actually, just change it please, dont continue, do something about that head. Do it differently, 5 different variants please.
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I’m getting my head around in-between cut-out and drawn animation. It’s quite simple when I’m only animating a parent object, but it quickly becomes daunting when multiple child objects have ease in/out, follow through, and drag. I don’t really have a clear workflow for this yet, and while I’d like to keep using Krita, I’m not sure how well I’ll be able to make it work.
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>>7850541
The perspective makes it look like she's leaning toward the viewer. Picrel is a rough idea of what I'd expect the rest of the drawing's perspective to be to match that.
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I agree, but I prefer to keep my mouth shut about it. This artist draws this kind of face enough that there's no way this isn't an intentional style choice. Since he seems intent on keeping his faces looking this way, there's nothing to be gained by commenting on it.
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The crazy thing is that just by moving the mouth a little bit up, and the nose a little bit down, the appeal improves quite a lot, for what it worth anyway.
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>>7853968
Not true, I defined the leg muscles better like one anon pointed out. I don't have time to rework the whole pose unfortunately as it's due today. I tried to twist the spine to show both tits and ass, i think it would look better if the breast nearest the raised arm was stretched out but alas.
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should be a bit better now
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12 hours left
im getting tired already
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>>7854292
Yes you said "other anons", two people provided feedback, I told you that I took one's into consideration and said that the other one would require too much of a rework at this stage.
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What's not to understand? There's a guy who posted child porn twice here today (I reported both) and now he's spamming the board with loli images accompanied with random questions. I don't give a shit about the post quality of this board since pixel schizo.gets two full time threads, and the janny here is a power tripping lolicon. So I'll post what I want. That's it
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Fetishy idea I've had for a while.
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easily the gayest shit i have ever drawn
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That's not an appropriate comment to make toward the first guy you quoted. You need a better eye for distinguishing between works that are intentionally simplistic and works that are /beg/. Hint: it's in the forms.
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how do i make porn without getting bored 2 minutes in
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developing a NEET girl OC
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What's looking wrong so far? Need to know mistakes before I finish it
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felt kinda bad for bakushin after I finished it
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Do any of you have experience getting your art taken down from porn sites like Nozomi.la or Hentaiera? I have some old shitty art in there and I'm too technologically stupid to understand how to contact their support. Nozomi seems to be some kind of a mirror site but that doesn't really help me.
Would appreciate a kind anon's input.
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@monosuccs
I'm not really posting anything on there tho.
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How do I escape the "character in heaven" zone?
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crossover
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made a fan art of the label from Nikke
Also, 7861191, this drawing is really good, looks professional
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There's a imminent sex between Dreamy Pride and Woman Goat. The goat released the dreamy pride as a joke, but little does she know what the monstrous cock has to offer her.
What you think it?
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Baku baku bakushin bakushin shin shin shiiinn!!
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If I had seen that pic without your question, I wouldn't have been thinking them being loli/underage. Now that I know the context I can see youngish propotions that I would have at first glance brushed off as anatomical errors or stylization.
To be completely honest with you, if you have to ask or you have second guesses, you know you are doing something wrong. Maybe there's something in your mind you need to work through. I am not judging, art is art and drawings can't hurt anyone. But I'm thinking you yourself are not completely cool with it.
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>POV
>I post SFW drawing on Pixiv.
>A week passes, barely 100 views.
>Then I post one NSFW drawing.
>300 views in a day.
>100 bookmarks.
>Followers I didn’t have yesterday.
>Same artist.
>Same effort.
Is this really what my art needs to become to be seen?
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Idk mon
I'm just doing it for the love of the game
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I think last time I posted in this thread it was /sex/, now we're back to /salt/ again lol.
Here's some recent WIPs from me
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>>7864036
apparently 4chan thinks my post is spam if I ask for too many blogs at once??? gj gookmoot
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Blog?
Also I'm gonna tackle the rest of this leviathan of a comm (it's in the queue). Wish me luck boys
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>>7864216
its what the brief called for. This particularl comm enjoys detail. Here's another one I did for him
full res if you're interested:
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>>7864216
its a lot, but the pay is good and I like the detailing. It's one of my artistic joys
>>7864809
still working on my faces, they're a lot better than they used to be. These ones are on model tho.
>>7865033
I think the concept is good, but I'd think about the perspective and composition. The figure feels a bit flatly position in the frame so the angle is a little stiff and lifeless. You may have to play with proportion and foreshortening which can be hard to do, but that's where references can be a great help.
here's a similar pose at a more intense angle:
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>>7857596
Das right. I did make the right arm shorter but it was too late to change the back in the bottom. Hopefully next time I will make less mistakes
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>>7865072
I think it's really cool
>>7865098
To add on what this anon is saying
You seem to be engaging in some penrose stair tomfoolery when deciding what image sits on top or behind.
Maybe its intentional to fill space as efficiently as you can, but this combined with the size/perspective differences of each scene sort of leads to a mindfuck at first glance.
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>>7865437
>penrose stair tomfoolery
lol I actually like that.
I made this piece by looking at an artist called thirty8ght, he also likes to play with the size/perspective of each scene
It's definitely gonna be a matter of practice to fill the gaps in my skill level though
https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?tags=thirty_8ght&z=1
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>>7865072
Thanks for your feedback and resources! Tried shifting the pose around to make it more interesting. Was about to scrap the whole thing but I liked how this is looking. Might see to finish it.
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>>7866055
Ended up doing a little foreshortening to spice things up. I believe this is the first time I straight up finish an explicit piece, feels kind of weird.
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Your shit is crazy good, really interesting to look at, I'm flattered you asked for my blog, it's @venucake on twitter/bsky
What's your blog?
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don´t worry. i know everybody loves traps. they are just afraid to admit it.
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>>7866812
I really like the idea, but I think you would benefit from watching more magazine covers and thinking more like a photographer. The main issue for me is that the angle shot of the limbs doesn't match the one of the torso. The torso looks taken on a straight on shot and the limbs look more like a 45 high angle shot.
Take more time sketching and playing around with the idea.
Here are some ideas great job
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>>7867572
Lol thanks
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First one is the ref but I wasn’t drawing straight from ref, I looked at it and drew it from memory so that explains the disproportionate elements
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I have decided that this thread isn't gay enough. Also, I need help with backgrounds: I don't like drawing them and anything I do sucks. I want to try my hand at making simple, abstract backgrounds for my characters. Anyone got tips?
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I'm slowly losing my libido.
This might be the end of my journey as a hentai artist.
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I have to do a commission, but I don't want to. Have a Risky.
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Joann AKA BlackBird gets dick
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No curvature to the spine makes the pose extremely stiff.
Rear leg is a lot longer than the front leg, it looks like you drew the legs on without considering the angle of the hips.
The breasts look like they connect to her shoulder bones rather being attached to the pectorals.
Torso proportions just off in general, wide shoulders but literally no hips despite having a big butt.
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>>7869147
I disagree radically regarding hips. I don't understand what hips you expect to see with a pose like this, the hips sink into your body in an any arrow-like position unless one is a skeleton. I am no anime-girl but when I do anything like this my hips disappear
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And just for lulz
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Flat color for my character. Need to have her in a better pose
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Gonna rework her belly area but I’m starting to like this one a lot
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Advice on improving the pussy on the penetration closeup? I want to redo my sketches before I continue.
I know I should avoid chicken scratch sketches - I was drunk when I started drawing this, after a month of not drawing.
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>>7842070
Why are you guys still drawing sexual/NSFW/porn art knowing that it's already been proven to be devastating to your life.
Just asking.
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>>7871439
I am not sure how true is that, but artist and whores always have been close, in relationships, in business and in the arts. I think we should be a bit more open minded, instead of thinking it as consumption, we create.
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>>7871439
Most modern studies suffer from not being able to be replicated, or a lack of peer review in general.
Many studies related to behavior or the brain are not trustworthy, with researchers "shopping" for sample groups that will give them results supporting their employers agendas.
Many older studies on topics like pornography and sex have results skewed by meddling from the overly religious.
Correlation != causation, meaning people who are predisposed to watching large amounts of porn regularly might do so because of the preexisting lacking grey matter, or there could even be some additional tertiary thing tying them together.
Finally, developing the skills to draw pornographic material and exerting those skills is not the same as passively consuming porn.
Hope that answers your bad faith bait sufficiently.
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>>7869911
SamiWays went from being a meme to looking like an average poster on the board. Insane that he even looks less unhinged than some here
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little shading test
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Please salvage this smoldering corpse that is my art; its supposed to be a floating thicc bunny girl in a void that I decided to just stick on a stripper pole. i didnt reference anything either so ugh
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works perfectly fine by making the head slightly bigger and adjusting perspective.
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How about now?
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>>7871958
Thanks for the redline but i can see your legs are still shorter. Perhaps i'll come back later to this. I realized i really can't draw heads. I need to do some practice drawings specifically for the head now. I make eyes way too far apart.
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I think composition is the least of problems. Focus on improving light values (not right now, cuz you can't improve it within a day), even without colors those tits would look flat as hell, you don't actually imagine them as a 3d object in your mind
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I did not say you can fix it in a day. Just move on and study later. You don't know how to apply shadows right now, you can't draw 3d objects, you have to draw and paint either real-life stuff or study much better artists with good values to learn their ways
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>>7872508
Dude just tell what's wrong..
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Other anon here, values look ok to me. But there are issues with inconsistent soft and hard edges when moving from light to shadow. Consider if a shadow is a cast or form shadow (+ is it sun light, a studio light etc.). For example on the right boob the strip of cloth is casting a hard shadow which is correct but the actual form shadow should be soft, like you've done on the guy's thighs. If you want to render further check if you have all the basic light information on each of your forms (picrel)
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Light values = shadows. You struggle with shadows on characters. There's nothing else to explain, the only way to improve here is to produce actual copies and understand technique through your own muscles, not absorbing theory and sitting on ass. Here's an example of flat shading by an experienced guy. He has better understanding of shapes, hence why his shading will be better even if he uses only flats. And the picrelated guy is still far from pinnacle, there are very high pros who can achieve excellent depth on a picture using only flats
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Mm so you mean the anon isn't properly describing the form with choice of values used i.e shading? I guess you could say that but it's very nitpicky, usually when values are discussed it's about the relation ship of the shadow and light families. Something good to understand as well is that the terminator decides when something is in shadow or in light. Even if a surface is at 89 degrees it's still lit by that light source. Your pic also has very by-the-feel shading, it looks nice but the lighting scenario isn't "correct" similarly to anon's art, which I think is totally fine but kinda undermines your point. Also if that's far from the pinnacle and you know some master, just use them as an example, no?
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I don't consider it nitpicky and I don't understand what else there is to discuss and why you are wasting my time. The guy asked for criticism, it was given, a blind retard asked for my work, it was attached as well, end of story.
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>>7872537
Don't talk about wasting time when it's your personal choice whether to engage in discussion, lol. Anon delivered with a good improvement on composition and you basically berate them with shitty "crit" with no explanation of what is wrong. I had to pry it out of you and still you didn't even give a concrete example. It's laughable really, no one here is /adv/, you can say that everything is incorrect and probably be right but obviously there is no value in that. You could have just said nothing.
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>>7872548
As an outside observer if you're going to be so laconic and rude with your feedback you should at least do a quick paintover. Part of the reason people are confused is because you're misusing terms. When people say you need to work on your values, they usually mean compositionally, like light groups and dark groups. You're talking about shading and 3-D structure, which is a different thing altogether. Anyway, I think the biggest reason the left breast looks flat is because the clothing isn't draped on it properly.
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>>7872093
You could try resetting your main light, then mark areas of interest into three tiers of priority, then use that as your basis for where to cast the light. Doesn't even have to be realistic, as long as there's some kind of logic behind it.
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This is vanilla or whatever I guess
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Next time somebody says "try before you buy" I'mma break a pool cue up their ass.
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