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>>4486697

guy reading bootlegged books

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>>4486697
managed to nervously ask a vendor for permission lol

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>>4486697
I don't like the outfit
I don't like the set
Crop subject
Whack composition

>>4486709
Alright, how would you crop it? Closer to the subject? Tho I cant do much about the outfit :/

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>>4486709
>cropped in tighter
>added a tiny bit of cyan in the shadows

Is this better?

>>4486714
>>4486713
Sorry, asking for details or specifics about feedback just means you are butthurt lol

>>4486715
uhhhh I am just trying to learn and improve. There's absolutely nothing to be butthurt about. Besides, isn't that the point of feedback? Trying to fix mistakes?

>>4486716
No here on /p/

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too self-conscious for a real self portrait tee hee

saar status?

>>4486761
>redeemed
I have a few more pics

>>4486697
Actually very good shots.
You even got some /p/haggots seething.

>>4486716
Ignore the shitposter, he's the one who tried to pass some myspace tier shots as his own and got called out on it

>>4486945
>You even got some /p/haggots seething.
Yes because OP is brown and the photos include brown people.
This is just normal 4chan behaviour as far as I'm concerned.

>>4486697
these are pretty good. much better than the usual autistic, anti-aesthetic slop we usually get in here. keep posting saaaarrr

this is unironically a great set, great location, all shots are pretty well done. Great job anonistan!!

>>4486716
anon, this is seriously one of the most toxic spaces on the internet. You have good intentions and an interesting place to shoot, but looking for validation or actual feedback here is futile. The only way a photo would ever be appreciated here is if it was a phone pic of the latest and greatest 60mp cam that youtube is shilling

>>4486706
Which lens was this one shot on? I've been looking for a decent portrait lens and I love how the shot turned out.

Also gj with the pictures and thanks for making /p/ a better place.

>>4486714
I like this crop, but for the colors I like the previous one better

>>4486697
I like this one anon. The lighting is great and the composition is great too, I don't agree with the other guy saying you need to crop more, the whole goal is to see the books. To me there's a slight rotation of the main left line of books that I don't like. Also for the composition I would've stepped one or two steps to the right I think, this kind of angle is overdone, taking a pic of X subject through a frame Y (here the books pile) by just putting yourself perfectly in front of said subject will limit you. By taking a step to the right you would cut a bit of the guy and make it look like he's leaning on a pile of books, making the guy look more charismatic. Or maybe you can shoot in landscape mode, so the legs are cut and we see more books, but idk if there's more books on the right and left. Also the unlit cigarette is kinda strange, idk if it's your friend posing but cigarette + this light would create a cool smoke effect. The other pics are snapshits with no composition, you can do better

>>4486706
nice portrait.
today i learned that english is a major language in pakistan
>>4486699
nice light. i'd drop the shadows dramatically to emphasize the hightlight.

>>4486967
Thanks! I'll take the advice anons gave here and try to improve next time.

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>>4486963
>>4486967
>>4486945

I've got a few more

>>4486977
>Which lens was this one shot on?

Canon RF 50mm F/1.8 STM

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>>4487200
You've made a great point with the composition critique. I will try to avoid cliched angles next time!

> Or maybe you can shoot in landscape mode, so the legs are cut...
This one is shot in landscape. If you don't mind, how could I go about improving this?

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>>4487238
>nice light. i'd drop the shadows dramatically to emphasize the hightlight.

Like this?

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>>4487280

>>4487238
>today i learned that english is a major language in pakistan

All official documents are in english. Education is in english, etc. Tho it sucks for the ~40% uneducated people who are stuck in a system where they can't do anything, even open a bank account or get a minimum wage job since they can't read/speak/write in english.

>>4486697
A fellow Lahori on 4chan, let's gooo
Lahore Lahore aey

Beautiful photos veerji. You nicely captured the atmosphere of Mall road and winters' light.

>>4486704
>>4486706
is your country just always this orange or is it post processing?

>>4487284
NTA yes something like that

>>4487308
It's actually a bit of both. The smog and pollution in the air make give the whole place a grungy yellow/orange feel. I did take some artistic liberty with the color grading in LrC tho

>>4487300
Thank you, saar! Another Lahori on the chinz of all places?? Who woulda thunk.

>>4487465
There were lots(by this I mean one dozen) of paki anons on /int/ back in 19/20. Then gorment banned 4chin. Now you occasionally see a weird autist on /int/ who boasts about having 3 naukars and being a useless piece of shit.

Anyway photography scene is good in Lahore but it's mostly fashion, wedding and tourist core. What kind of photography you do regularly?

>>4486697
>>4486699
>>4486706
>>4487280

These are my favourite of the bunch, nice thread anon. It's good to see a different setting for once.

>>4487468
I don't spend time on other boards much just /p/ and /tv/,

>Anyway photography scene is good in Lahore but it's mostly fashion, wedding and tourist core.

I'm so done with all the mega cringe wedding reels being spammed by local wedding photographers on IG. shaadi is the only thing that people spend big on.

>What kind of photography you do regularly?

Architectural. I'm not talking about the bullshit, hyper-commercial shitboxes being shoved down our throats by developers under the guise of "aesthetic modern living" lmao. I'm an architect, I do photography as a hobby and get decent commissions every couple of months tho, but thats mostly because I am picky about the people I work with.

What about you? What kind of photography interests you?

>>4487482
>I'm so done with all the mega cringe wedding reels being spammed by local wedding photographers on IG.
Kek, totally agree with you. Young women consume all of that wedding slop so there is a big market for that.

>shaadi is the only thing that people spend big on.
Whole punjab only spend big on two things, weddings and food

>>Architectural. I'm not talking about the bullshit, hyper-commercial shitboxes being shoved down our throats by developers under the guise of "aesthetic modern living" lmao.
I hate them too. Ugly fucking concrete and glass luns in the air.

>I'm an architect, I do photography as a hobby and get decent commissions every couple of months tho, but thats mostly because I am picky about the people I work with.
That's cool man. Do you work with people like Kamil Khan Mumtaz and people who are trying to revive traditional Punjabi style haveli architecture?

>What about you? What kind of photography interests you?
I use to do tourist core photography of the old meme city. Then few years ago I became depressed and lost my job so I gave up. But I am thinking about picking up the camera once again...

>>4487484
>That's cool man. Do you work with people like Kamil Khan Mumtaz and people who are trying to revive traditional Punjabi style haveli architecture?

Not with his firm personally, but definitely some of the very few top ones in Lahore.


>I use to do tourist core photography of the old meme city. Then few years ago I became depressed and lost my job so I gave up. But I am thinking about picking up the camera once again...

Always wanted to do those "viral" photo walks of the ol' meme city but haven't gotten the chance yet.
Anyway we should talk more, feel free to post your IG or whatever.

>>4487614
Can you please drop you IG? Or let me make a porton mail

>>4487284
yeah that's better.
>>4487288
why not add urdu to all that stuff?

>>4487280
kino backlighting

>>4487782
yeah for sure, share a proton mail, if you feel that's better.

>>4487841
>why not add urdu to all that stuff?

System is too corrupt, inept and broken for any major reforms. This is peak 3rd world lmao. In a way its cool tho, at least a decent chunk of people can communicate in english, makes working and learning easier.

>>4487881
Man I made the email, then 4chong rage banned me. Then when I tried to register with my mail on 4chonk porton blocked my shit.

I tried, Lahori anon

>>4486949
Nope, nice to see were still just lying here

>>4486706
superb portrait

>>4486706
>sickly skin colors
must be wormji or SNOY

>>4486709
It's a beautiful thing to watch someone turn board schizo over your throwaway thoughts. Have fun.

>>4488969
>I enjoy ruining the board
Pls go

>>4486706
Great shot anon. I genuinely like all your photos here, your shots have a lot of soul. Keep on doing what you're doing.

>>4486697
Based Pakastani. Good for you man. Don't let /p eople discourage you. Guaranteed if you keep doing it, you'll get better and better over time and find your own style.

Other than bizarre science fiction, and scientific study books, idk what else I would go there too find

Everything educational related has videos online


What books are you guys lookin for?

>>4490410
Fiction and picture books I suppose

>>4487280
these are good, what are you shooting with?

If a woman book lover turned up would all the guys rape her?

>>4491197
>woman
Ah you mean the cow

>>4491201
*goat

>>4490410
courswork books for students. Instead of buying them at full price, you could get a bootlegged version at half price, thats what one of the vendors told me

Based thread