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>>4496310
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>>4496314
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>>4496321
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>>4496309
>>4496314
The only ones with composition that held my attention.

And I don't like that in most of your photos the subjects are walking away from you, or right in front of you but seemingly unaware, like you were trying to sneak in a picture.

I think several of the photos are also unnecessarily overexposed? >>4496315

I meant to say these two >>4496332 >>4496317 caught my attention.

For >>4496317, you can crop out the rope I think.

>>4496333
>>4496317 >>4496309

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Mostly too wide for me.

If I go wide I feel like there should have to be a good reason to. Dwarfing a figure in a frame is usually bad I've found. Like you barely ever see a painting like that.

Theres too much going on in the frame and pointless stuff, keep clutter away. Just a few patterns, surfaces and shapes is better.

This crop is what I mean but the mast is in wrong place so I'd shift he boat further away from guy. There's like four textures

>>4496309
cool

>>4496310
shit

>>4496311
shit

>>4496312
shit

>>4496313
shit

>>4496314
cool

>>4496315
shit

>>4496316
shit

>>4496317
saved

>>4496318
nice

>>4496319
shit. also you have the silhouette of a woman

>>4496320
im conflicted. theres no subject but the lighting is so nice

>>4496321
not a fan

>>4496324
shit

>>4496339
cool

thanks for sharing