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If you are a /beg/inner in art, please use this thread to post pieces for critique or ask for advice.
DO NOT REPLY to crabs, nodraws, retards that whine about how hard drawing is or talent debates and instead focus on posted works!

>STICKY:
Completed: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1Vm4IJpq0Mbvb-Krl5_mJ_m6TsC_qjsaN/view
New collaborative: https://hackmd.io/UMnZVhNITW-T2wZpHw6d0Q
w/ic/i: https://sites.google.com/site/ourwici/
Hardcore: https://hackmd.io/7k0XRnIQR6SValR77TDfZw?view

>WHERE to get study materials
annas-archive.org
>>>/ic/artbook
>>>/ic/video

>Want to practice figures?
quickposes.com
sketchdaily.net
characterdesigns.com
lovelifedrawing.com
posemy.art
line-of-action.com

>Post Your Work and give your feedback
What can be improved?
Are there any resources videos or books you'd recommend to them?
Maybe a redline or a technique, be specific.
When receiving a critique, try to provide one in return

>best art teachers
Glenn Vilppu
Michael Hampton
Steve Huston
Brent Eviston
Marco Bucci
Andrew Loomis
George Bridgman
Hikaru Hayashi
Hide Sensei

>best art books
Keys To Drawing
Drawing With the Right Side of the Brain
How To Draw Comics the Marvel Way
The Art and Science of Drawing
Framed Perspective
Figure Drawing For All It's Worth
The Complete Guide to Drawing From Life

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>obligatory I didn't make it to OP yet again post
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made it on the op gang
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>>7873393
You probably posted too late

>>7873398
Congrats
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>>7873389
HUMILIATION RITUAL
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I think it’s fucking bullshit they just because I don’t post art I don’t get pictures in the op fuck you faggots I hope you get raped to death by a pack of feral niggers then get gorilla aids and die
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https://litter.catbox.moe/yw54t44uvifan1j7.jpeg
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Fun with a pencil status? Had.
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>>7873416
well.. uh.. its great that you had fun anon..
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>5 minute sketch
What went wrong?
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The project I'm developing has the characters sprites change styles at different points in the story - think I'm making the right call nixing the middle two designs?
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I stopped drawing for a week again...
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>>7873427
Keep the duplicated boots at the very least.
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>>7873428
Cute slut.
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I’m going to redraw at least one more time before doing the lines. Need to work on the face more to give off the expression I’m going for
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>>7873429
Huh, alright I have this bad habit of making full bod portraits half body portraits when I fuck up, but gotta learn somehow.
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How do I get the motivation to finish something when I can already see from the sketch it will look like shit
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>>7873437
fix the parts that make it look shit
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How long til I can draw a hand from imagination?
I don't want to complete 3 years trying...
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>>7873441
luckily you should always have a reference on hand
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these threads are worthless
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>>7873455
Your face is worthless!
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Warm up monster
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>>7873407
Is it just me or that kid's feet are massive?

>>7873416
Good line quality

>>7873425
You need confidence in your strokes or you'll be doing chicken scratches. Also you should probably study values

>>7873427
I like the two on the left

>>7873428
I haven't drawn for a few weeks. I am getting back into it

Here's my latest. Drew this in some random dry-ass markers from Temu for my friend. It's Potbelly on Light Island from My Singing Monsters. Please critique and tell me what I should practice drawing next or something I could improve on.
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How do I fix this? It's like pressure suddenly changes in a fraction of a second. My tablet is Wacom Intious Pro
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>>7873473
Try a fresh nib if you haven't already.
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>>7873389
ok ic what do you think of this sketch, anything i should add or fix.
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>>7873432
Does the torso look alright? I might lower it more to sell the lean better
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>>7873482
i think that lowering the torso may work, but don't redraw it, the torso is all right is just the position, in my opinion the sketch is good.
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>>7873481
burn it
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>>7873484
are you the permabeg schizo? if you are your opinion doesn't matter.
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>>7873482
I think you could go either way on the torso. I'm a little confused where her left arm is going. If you do exaggerate the lean forward, you could drop her left shoulder a bit and have her left arm rest on her knee/thigh to balance the lean. I like the pose overall though.
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>>7873486
Permagoonerschizo would never say that.
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>>7873481
Seek Jesus you disgusting freak.
I am tired of sharing a board with you degenerate porn addicted subhumans.
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>>7873481
I feel like the "lower" leg looks weird, like a pile of skin or something. The higher leg looks alot better I think.
Also peepee tip looks off, but I cant say what exactly
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>>7873497
thanks i will fix those problems now.
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>>7873486
>>7873492
He would say
mogs me
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>>7873432
Good smug face as always ,it gets my penis hard
However i shall send you some edits for the arm and hair if you can send the refs used for the character being drawn and the pose.
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>>7873509
Who is this? I’ll dm the refs on twitter
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Shading is always fun except for the part where you realize your line art is fucked beyond repair and you're wasting your time polishing turds
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>>7873493
>I am tired of sharing a board
Then go back to twatter.
What kind of obnoxious moron goes to a red board on 4chan and complains he sees porn?
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>>7873497
i think i fixed the dick, idk about the leg, i still dont know how legs work i need to study Bridgman again.
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>>7873481
>big mac
I'd add a urethra piercing to evoke the third bread slice and glans bumps for the white stuff on top
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Fun? Currently having it.
A relaxing birb.
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>>7873517
this is actually a good idea
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>>7873517
here the burger
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Post your WIPs
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>>7873531
A boomer piece I’m working on
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>>7873512
break up the middle hairline a bit
the continuous line breaks the illusion and makes your hairstyle look flatter than natural
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Rat design because I want to do Redwall justice. The design you see drawn in brown was made by contour drawing. The others here are extrapolations; me attempting to “standardize” how these rats are drawn. My main concern is whether I’ve made a “front view” that looks consistent with the other angles, but I also wonder if it’s even necessary to make these front views?
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>>7873512
Worry about your anatomy instead of what LITERALLY DOESNT FUCKING MATTER LIKE LINE ART

fucking retard, polish your turd brain
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making my way back to doing some studies
gonna start reading keys to drawing today, may do an exercise from it or something
I think the nun turned out quite well, while the punk looks kind of wonky

>>7873552
redwall was a fantastic series desu, good choice
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>>7873512
Crocker from FOP neck ear
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>>7873555
I'm not talking about the line quality, I'm saying the line art is fucked in the sense that the subject it represents is wrong. How exactly do you practice anatomy without trying to put the right lines in the right places?
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>>7873572
You just do
>>7873557
kek
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>>7873389
Wip
No problem, right guys?
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>>7873578
Anatomy is too consistent/uniform. Try to make lines more dynamic yet lifelike and inconsistent
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THREAD CHALLENGE
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>>7873578
Is the red figure resting on a pillow or something? There's no way she could stay in that position without tipping over
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>>7873578
Red figure left leg is MASSIVE, it's further away yet thicker than the closer leg?
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>>7873588
Oh, good catch

>>7873587
Yeah. Originally, I thought of a pillow but I figured that I needed the hair to flow
Guess I should add a pillow, afterall
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>>7873481
why does she have two left hands
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>>7873511
I'm just a silly little guy :)
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>>7873586
what does this pose communicate
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>>7873604
I don't know.. it looks aesthetically pleasing? Maybe just because she's one very beautiful model
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>>7873607
in other words its a shitty pose, next
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>>7873609
That's a beautiful classic pose. What are you talking about?
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>>7873586
does it always have to be a naked woman
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>>7873612
You all can't draw shit because this is what you draw
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>>7873614
You can paint a naked man instead
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i need to spend at least 60% of my time drawing from imagination or i lose all interest in the hobby
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does this looks too fucked up? the pose was troubling me and something about the face bothers me but i can't quite put my finger on what
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>>7873625
Doesn't look too bad to me, it just looks like her elbow is very hyper-extended here. Usually a fully extended arm bends the other way.
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>>7873427
At your current skill level, I think you're biting off more than you can chew by attempting different styles. You're already struggling to keep details consistent that shouldn't be changing in different styles (whether there's a visible scar under her eye patch, the height of that blue gem on her chest, etc). You're also not changing enough with each style, the coloring and linework is too similar which lessens the effect. The leftmost sprite is simple but appealing, if you stick to that style, work on your facial anatomy and the hair shape, I think you can make something nice.
Pic related is my edit. Just a guess but it seems like you don't draw the eye under the eyepatch, or the shape of the head that's covered by hair. Even if they're erased later, sketching where they are will make it easier to have things like the eyepatch and scar in the right place and at the right size. The other big thing is the elf ears. Be mindful of where they start on the head and how high you're having them end. Also don't forget to draw the eyebrows.
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>>7873625
Not the face but the tangent of her index finger and hip is bad
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you like children
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Retried the cat using a pencil instead of digital and I like it, still kinda wish had some colored pencils but I had fun.
I think the eyes are a bit less round than the original but otherwise I'm not unhappy.

Whats the thing to learn to draw goobers like this by yourself? figure drawing? Construction? Something totally different?
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>>7873653
The ref
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what did you mean by that?
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>>7870269
PAGE9 DONE! I decided to add some color to the bodies, I redid the color on the previous pages here >>>/i/826788

>>7873526
>>7873514
>>7873481
Interesting and nice anatomy lines on the hip and legs area. Saved for future ref
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>>7873629
i'll keep that in mind! i used a picture of myself for reference and perhaps the shitty camera angle distorted the arm? or maybe i failed to properly translate it and account for the back, idk; regardless i'll see what i can do to make it more correct.
>>7873637
ah okay, thank you. will fix it. the more i look into it, the less sense it makes for it to be like that when the pose is kinda angled. appreciate it
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>>7873671
turdpolish masterclass
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haven't had a lot of time to draw lately
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>>7873586
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>>7873674
>>7873671
perspective is fucked but looks pretty cool regardless
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First time drawing comic strips, inspired by the European style of the 80's. I like the resource of honomatopoeias and movements, but their distribution is extremely difficult.
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>>7873671
I live in that building
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>>7873684
Father is that you
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>>7873671
This fucks. Where do you post?
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>>7873389
>>7873680
Wrong board, faggot. How long did that take you
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>>7873688
https://www.instagram.com/quick_burner01?igsh=MWV5NnhwamEyczE4ZA==
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>>7873677
Good morning ivan why are you speaking
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>>7873658
Dunno really, last time I was bothered to check the news was like year ago, didn't hear anything about it ever since.
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>>7873671
perspective is non-existent but maximum soul kino
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>>7873703
nta but how can it be shit but not shit?? Makes no sense desu.
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>>7873700
I'm waiting in the apartment until the cops kick me out and hoping the snow melts
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>>7873707
because even with clear flaws it's appealing
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>>7873707
У мeня тaм вcя жизнь бyквaльнo
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>>7873710
>>7873707
What is life but a series of flaws
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>>7873707
its earnest
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>>7873671
>>7873707
The fuckedupness makes it surreal and interesting to look at
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>>7873707
Composition, color harmony, values. If I had to guess it's a drawing of a photograph someone else took so it's like having an extremely solid foundation that they can just draw on top of resulting in this charm of low skill painting vs high skill composition/colors.
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>>7873707
Appeal > accuracy
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>>7873586
faliure hits the hardest when I start to feel like I'm finally progressing
>>7873671
>b-but the perspective though!!
retards. keep grinding your boxes
>>7873675
much progress in a short span of time
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>>7873753
What is this trying to say? That the perspective which is clearly a big part of this like
>>7873671 rotoscoped image, isn't important?
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>>7873718
I think that was a statement not a question
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>>7873586
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>>7873473
people call it "shoelace", google for more fixes
https://docs.thesevenpens.com/drawtab/troubleshooting/tsg-shoelaces-at-end-of-strokes

take the nib out and blow it clean
re-install drivers, check pressure settings
try different art software
otherwise use Lazy Nezumi to fix it
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>>7873526
this is going to take a long time, but i have to do it.
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read a few pages of keys to drawing, didn't have the mental stamina to really get into it tho
little before doodle though, just lightly keeping in mind some of the stuff I read
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I haven't done a full figure in months, so this was pretty agonizing, but I know it's good for me.
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Been trying to get the face right for like an hour but it is diminishing return... :P Will redraw arms and hands again then do the lineart hopefully
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>>7873766
i dont think its rotoscoped (i dont think thats even the proper term here lol) but i do think it is referencing an image. it's still very pleasant to look at
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>>7873586
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have this over rendered man
>>7872417
np :3
and thanksies :D
whos the kitty cat?

>>7873493
get a hold of yourself
i will mail you monkey tits next time
>>7873661
OH MAN, that demon thing is tempting me
>>7873653
very cute
>>7873467
hongry plant
very cool
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mecha sketches
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>>7873837
what's your process for drawing these, they always look so clean
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It has been a few weeks. I am not very good at drawing but I drew and painted this and built the frame over the last week and a half as a gift to a friend.
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>>7873842
thanks. not really much of a process desu. i just draw an autistic amount of mecha because i suck at human anatomy.

one thing that helped me i guess was drawing for years in trad with fineliners. forces you to just wing that shit since you cant really fix mistakes.
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>>7873843
I hate Australians so goddamn much
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>>7873847
Yeah I don't know how that happened.
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>>7873844
do you ever look at mamoru Nagano's work? his are some of my favorite designs, at least before gothicmade
that all looks really cool though, reminds me of those car manuals ppl used to have
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>>7873467
You know what they say about guys with big feet.
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Still having a tough time with anatomy, but getting a little better.
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>>7873864
uoooooh
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I feel like all my drawings have this flatness when some guys just draw a character sitting but it still looks like they are in 3D space

how do i work on that? making them pop out a lot more.

>>7873837
They look neat
makes me wanna draw some mecha shit
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>>7873870
That's called perspective
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>>7873864
now draw her giving birth
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I CANT FUCKING DRAW
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>>7873881
I CANT FUCK
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I CANT CUM
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thread challenge
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how do I get good
fuck man I just don't know
I've lost all motivation to continue
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anyone else hate the limited amount of colors on most displays
if I look at my art on my phone it's like instantly half of the details disappear
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I always mess up the proportions in studies, shame.
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>>7873900
And the reference.
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>>7873885
Those boobs were shopped, isn't it?
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>>7873586
Challenge
>>7873833
>whos the kitty cat?
According with the OP anon >>7872642 >>7871893 her name is Lichihara AKA "Chi-chi"
>>7873833
>OH MAN, that demon thing is tempting me
Yeah, he has a lot to do in the next pages >=) .. he he he.. I left you a reply in the Black History Month Thread.. hee-hee
>>7873753
PERFECTION!
>>7873680
Awesome! Please do more little comics!
>>7873675
Beautiful doodles!
>>7873671
Best in thread
>>7873843
I really like that A LOT... Saved. Your friend is very lucky.
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>>7873885
Not the best idea to make a thread challenge something heavily shooped, fella. Is every thread challenge gooner shit?
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>>7873885
Please go jack off.
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>>7873908
That really means a lot. Thank you.

I'm really excited because my friend is a real artist and she is apparently making a painting for me right now.
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This was a doodle from a hour ago.
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>>7873909
This. I don't mind actual figure art, but nudity for the sake of it is a bit much.
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When did you realize there's no point in chasing skill when literally nobody cares about it and the only thing that matters is soul and you have none?
>>7873671
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was struck with a sort of bolt of inspiration and made this in the span of half an hour on a single layer
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>>7873917
How do you know you dont?
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Not directed at anybody on this thread, but more so based on behavior I keep seeing on plebbit. It's really obnoxious when somebody who is clearly skilled says something along the lines of, "Beginner am new to this" when their art is easily at ant int or advanced level. Like who are you kidding buddy? You want praise? Do you want people to glaze you and call you a prodigy? If you truly were that good you'd have already been discovered by now like the 17 year old animator that got picked up for his amazing animations. Not once did that fucker say he was a beginner by the way, he didn't need to lower the bar for people to glaze him, he was just him. Anyways, just wanted to rant.
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>>7873919
I've been posting for couple years and never got more than 1 or 2 yous
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Terrible tooth pain, can't draw much
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>>7873924
Talented rats are mostly unaware of their gifts.
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>>7873927
mmmm me thinks not. With the average skill level of the sub i was looking at, it was the equivalent of a highschool jv football player accidentally thinking they belong on an 8 year old's flag football team. I think it's pretty clear when people are fishing for validation.
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>>7873931
People are prideful. Permabegs who refuse to believe they are permabegs, talented rats who want to believe they are all hardwork and no talent and that they had it as hard as everyone else, average tards who think they can be good as their idols with just hard work.
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>>7873671
this is what they mean by sovl
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ALL MYU SHAPES ARE SHIT
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>>7873938
what's a myu shape?
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>>7873933
permabegs should be required to post their work along with their essays to prove they're not larping rats
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>>7873917
I honestly see all of those posters as NGMI, soul is irrelevant to artwork and critique, if you want to fellate garbage drawings just go back to deviant art.
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>>7873924
Maybe it's just viewer's dunning kruger, so you think they are better than they objectively are. Someone at 10 steps is 10 times furthen than you at 1 step yet the pros are at a 100 steps kinda thing
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>>7873941
>soul is irrelevant to artwork
When did you learn you shared this board with heartless creatures?
The truth is that art is what we experience it as. No matter if it is cleanly in the lines. True art should make you feel something. If it doesn't, it isn't art.
It could be a white speck surrounded by a sea of black. If that white speck had a world of effort and care put into it, you could certainly see (and feel) that.
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>>7873885
based goonGOD delivering the good stuff, I'll do that one later
>>7873586
ref
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>>7873945
nta I'm dead inside, art makes me feel nothing.
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>>7873948
Did you look at the earlier image? What does it say to you? Do you have any favorite art in this thread?
Do you draw, yourself?
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>>7873941
Laughably wrong. You have no idea how many top notch draftsmen Chinese, European, Russian, Korean and Japanese art schools pump out every year. People who mog all /ic/ a thousand times over. And where do most of them end up? Doing art for postcards or shop bags or best case some indie video game designs for pennies. 99% of skilled artists are nobodies. Unless you consider having any paying art job "making it".
People who make it either have soul AND peak skill or their SOVL is so overflowing it doesn't matter their art is shit. The bottom line is, skill is irrelevant. Soul is what people really care about. You can only earn some autism cred if you nail perspective and that's all.
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>>7873957
everyone has a soul and feefees, not everyone can draw, go hug your cat
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>>7873958
>everyone has a soul
No, not really. Most people don't.
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>>7873957
When did the definition of making it became clown maxxing on social media or being the one in a billion idea guy with beg art? You want to be a comedian or writer, just say so
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How do artists come up with poses and composition quickly? I find I get held up and lose a lot of time trying to find something from nothing.
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It's very fun to sketch with 0 stabilization, 0 pen pressure brush. Like doodling in MS Paint but more convenient.
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>>7873968
my lines are smooth as af and i use 0 stabilization >_> but i dont draw on a cucktablet
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>>7873966
anything that's quick is only from experience
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>>7873963
Damn this is the most pathetic cope I've seen in a while on /ic/. Those people with recognition and bags of money from their? Uhhmm they are... le clowns... Yep that's it now my psyche is comfy again. Fucking lmaoing @ you.
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Aiza time
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>>7873986
>Those people with recognition and bags of money from their?
Art, I assume or could it be jestering? Lol. Obviously a top tier artist that gets money solely by putting up a patreon is another thing but who are the begs with overwhelming soul that are getting "bags of money" actually for their art, be real

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